Prison Stories: Tales From The Slammer

Shawshank Redemption

Something dawned on me one day.  A lot of stories either start, take place entirely, or spend some time in a prison.  It could be any genre too.  So, what is it about the prison setting that draws people to it?

In terms of fantasy adventures, this is a common place for the heroes to meet each other and develop a mutual goal.  That would be escaping or survival.  I think this would carry into any genre.  People find themselves in the same situation and will band together to increase their chances of survival.  Sure, you can have different factions appear in a prison and some people will be loners by nature.  Still, you tend to see some type of society appear with currency, hierarchy, and rules.  At least in fiction since I’m not sure how prisons work in the real world.

Another aspect of the prison story is that the readers are made to feel sorry for the protagonists.  Maybe they were falsely imprisoned or their crime wasn’t horrible enough to devoid their humanity.  It could even be that there are eviler (That’s a word!?) people around, so they are ‘heroic’ by comparison.  Either way, there is a level of sympathy for the person being in prison.  So, the readers root for them to either regain their freedom or at least survive in some semblance of peace.  This is a universal desire regardless of your situation too, so it touches on something at our core.  I mean, we all wish to be truly free, survive, and live in peace.

From the other side of the scenario, you can have a story about the guards who are there to do their job.  This might be easier to relate to since they aren’t criminals and are usually only depicted as corrupt when their the villains.  Prison guard is a job that one can see comes with a lot of stress and danger. Another position where one hopes for survival, especially if the inmates take over.  Even if it’s not that dire, you can use the setting for a psychological tale examining human nature.  Can one be a guard and still see the prisoners as full humans?  Is sympathy allowed?  It is probably easier to figure out in the real world, but not when you barely know about it.

I think the setting appeals to readers as well because it’s a place that most don’t want to find themselves.  It isn’t like being in a natural disaster or a dystopian landscape because ending up in prison is a real world possibility.  Sure, we all follow the rules and do our best not to get arrested.  Living a normal life means you don’t get in any trouble, but the threat is always there.  Not even on a conscious level, but a subconscious one that urges us to stick to the rules.  A story taking place in prison makes us consider how we would handle the situation and subtly accept that it’s entirely possible.  Maybe this is a bit farfetched, but I think it does have some basis in truth.

Personally, I like the prison story in small doses or based more in reality.  I’ve seen a bunch where it drags on for a while or the guards are cartoonishly corrupt.  I prefer it to be used as a starting point or a temporary situation the heroes have to escape.  Although, I do enjoy stories where the prison is taken over by the inmates or there is some other disturbance, which turns it solely into a setting.  This is probably why I haven’t really tried a prison story yet.  My heroes tend to be temporarily captured and put in a dungeon or made into a slave until they escape.  I believe one of my series does have a prison setting at one point for a good chunk of a story, but it’s not the full thing.  Not sure why I can’t get heavily into such a setting.

What do other people think about prison setting stories?

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About Charles Yallowitz

Charles E. Yallowitz was born, raised, and educated in New York. Then he spent a few years in Florida, realized his fear of alligators, and moved back to the Empire State. When he isn't working hard on his epic fantasy stories, Charles can be found cooking or going on whatever adventure his son has planned for the day. 'Legends of Windemere' is his first series, but it certainly won't be his last.
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11 Responses to Prison Stories: Tales From The Slammer

  1. L. Marie's avatar L. Marie says:

    I think of The Count of Monte Cristo, A Tale of Two Cities, Little Dorrit, and of course The Shawshank Redemption. All are great stories. Some of these stories go hand in hand with political intrigue. As you mentioned, good character bonding can take place. An old show that used to be on TV that is now on DVD—the old Mission: Impossible series (the inspiration for Tom Cruise’s movie series)—has several episodes in which the Impossible Missions Force has to escape from prison or break someone out of prison.

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  2. noelleg44's avatar noelleg44 says:

    I think you hit the nail on the head with this post, Charles. To L. Marie’s list, I might add The Green Mile, Escape from Alcatraz, The Birdman of Alcatraz (that prison is such a popular spot), and Midnight Express. There is also the book One Day in the Life of Ivan Denisovich by Alexander Solzhenitsyn.

    I think a present setting is a rich source of characters and tension. But it has to be realistic.

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  3. I like prison stories which begin with the protagonist is falsely imprisoned or thrown in jail for a minor crime because other factors (can’t make bail etc.) The forces there are enough to get him involved in some real trouble both inside and out.

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  4. This happens in some video games, as well. Especially the Elder Scrolls series (Morrowind, Oblivion, Skyrim) where the player character has even been condemned to die. Then of course the player escapes and they are set on a path of adventure because they literally have nothing but some sackcloth to wear.

    The other thing about being in jail is that it separates the characters from their usual comforts and supports. Some friends won’t associate with you after you’re arrested, you could lose your job, you don’t have things like a car or tools. So it forces the character to rely on their wits more than on “things.”

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