Questions 3: Beginning An Adventure

Shrek

It doesn’t always have to be a major quest or a wild adventure. Yet, groups have to start somewhere even if it’s prior to the book.  Authors need to consider the beginning when they go with ensemble casts.  After all, it sets the tone of setting, characters, action, and just about everything.

  1. How would you start a group adventure story?
  2. What do you think is a common mistake authors make when beginning an adventuring party story?
  3. Do you have a favorite ensemble cast introduction scene?
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Charles E. Yallowitz was born, raised, and educated in New York. Then he spent a few years in Florida, realized his fear of alligators, and moved back to the Empire State. When he isn't working hard on his epic fantasy stories, Charles can be found cooking or going on whatever adventure his son has planned for the day. 'Legends of Windemere' is his first series, but it certainly won't be his last.
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17 Responses to Questions 3: Beginning An Adventure

  1. L. Marie's avatar L. Marie says:
    1. I guess it depends on if this is an introduction to the group members in general or a sequel to a book that already introduced them. If this were new, I would probably start with one of the group members in trouble of some kind or scamming someone and getting in over his or her head. I can’t help thinking of an episode of Avatar: The Last Airbender when Toph, Sokka, and Aang scammed people for money. They weren’t introduced in the scene. I just like it. 😊
    2. Sometimes stories start off with action, but fail to show the group dynamics. Or too many people are introduced all at once and the reader has to try to keep up. In a movie, it’s easier to throw a bunch of characters in a scene, because the camera pans around them. But in a book, it’s harder.
    3. Your books have great group dynamics. I also love the way the first Avengers movie gradually introduced the team after Fury kicks off the Avengers Initiative. Mistborn by Brandon Sanderson also is really good with the “let’s assemble the team” action.

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  2. I would start a group adventure story with a group caught in a severe storm at sea

    A common mistake authors make when beginning an adventuring party story is to give a few characters dominance almost before the adventure begins. It’s like the writers didn’t want to go through the trouble of writing the events up to choosing a leader.

    My favorite ensemble cast introduction scene is The Lost TV show.

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    1. noelleg44's avatar noelleg44 says:

      I would probably start with a group conversation, which is a good way to introduce the participants.

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    2. Looking back I have started group stories with some sort of… meeting. Like, in Too Many Princes, the king called his family together to give them assignments. Or in The Seven Exalted Orders it began with basically a guild meeting of all the mages where one major character was asking for a rules change and got denied.

      It doesn’t sound exciting, but there are so many dynamics in a tense meeting that introduce characters and conflicts.

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    3. These are tough, but I try not to do the same thing twice. I tend to dribble in characters so readers don’t get overwhelmed with character soup. In Lanternfish they met them along the way. In my current WIP I introduced two, then a whole bunch of clones that are basically the same person, moved to a different planet and introduced two more before bringing them all together. I kind of like the idea of wounded lying on a battlefield with both sides claiming victory, some shade is cast about who takes who prisoner, then they help each other up and hobble off together. Might try that some day.

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    4. Jennie's avatar Jennie says:

      Did you know that Shrek was first a picture book? Great book, and great author.

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