Poetry Day: Mylrix Falls

Posted on December 19, 2024 by Charles Yallowitz

Vivi from FF9

(No reason for the picture.  This is more of a prophecy I hope to use in a future trilogy that explains the reason Windemere’s magic works the way it does.  Almost forgot it existed though.  A side note is that Mylrix was the first fantasy world I made in high school and it was replaced in college by Windemere.  The way the world looked is actually what I now call Pre-Great Cataclysm Windemere.  The name was moved to the plane of magic ruled by Gola.)

On the day the four moons fall

The magic mistress will be free

Her saviors born of mortal femmes

And have risen above their fragile flesh

Gola of the magic realm will fly

As the plane of Mylrix crashes forth

And her power rains into the fields

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About Charles Yallowitz

Charles E. Yallowitz was born, raised, and educated in New York. Then he spent a few years in Florida, realized his fear of alligators, and moved back to the Empire State. When he isn't working hard on his epic fantasy stories, Charles can be found cooking or going on whatever adventure his son has planned for the day. 'Legends of Windemere' is his first series, but it certainly won't be his last.
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8 Responses to Poetry Day: Mylrix Falls

  1. L. Marie's avatar L. Marie says:
    December 19, 2024 at 10:09 am

    How did you come to rediscover this poem?

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  2. John W. Howell's avatar John W. Howell says:
    December 19, 2024 at 2:27 pm

    Super poem, Charles.

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  3. coldhandboyack's avatar coldhandboyack says:
    December 20, 2024 at 6:56 am

    I sounds like a prophesy. Very cool.

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  4. DebyFredericks's avatar DebyFredericks says:
    December 21, 2024 at 11:09 am

    I have no idea what’s going on, but I love it. You could definitely lead into one or more books with this.

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