Desirae Duvall Rides Again

Drusilla from Buffy

This might be a short post only because this isn’t a big part of the book.  I think.  It is a hallmark though.  Desirae Duvall was the major villain of War of Nytefall: Ravenous and she is currently the only one outside of the main group of baddies to survive.  This wasn’t the original plan either.  Sort of.  I think?

Here’s the thing about Desirae.  She’s the character who moved in and out of this series the most.  Some versions had her as a key member while she never appeared in others.  I had this idea of having her show up once and then let her survive long enough to be brought back as a better villain in another series.   Part of the reason for this mess was that she wasn’t a very flushed out character when used in the game, so I didn’t have a good feel for her.  I had ‘seductive vampire whore who loves money and manipulation’ as her only explanation.  There wasn’t much more to her.  The original plan was to gather information, but Chastity Sullivan had that role.  What to do?

I had no plan, so I just wrote her with the intention of her holding out long enough to make the book fun.  Surprisingly, my not having a plan and some other lingering emotions resulted in her being a scene stealer.  At least for me.  Desirae ended up taking the strength of Kai Stavros and Chastity Sullivan, mixing in a playful demeanor, and running circles around everyone.  I found that she fit into a vampire niche that I never attempted to fill, which was the cunning seductress.  Not that I write sex scenes, but she makes it clear that she’s a lustful being.  That threw some characters off.  I also did a power change during the final outline and adjusted it throughout the book, which ended up answering some other questions.  Ever find a piece of a story puzzle that you didn’t even know was missing?  I think that’s Desirae here.

Now, what’s her role?  Well, it’s very small here and it connects to the newest monster on the block.  Those who read War of Nytefall: Ravenous already know and it gets explained more here.  It doesn’t shed her in the best of light either, but she has her reasons for it.  The blow to her ego and reputation is easy to recover from.  It’s why she may be showing up a few more times during the rest of the series too.  This gives me a more active villain who doesn’t really care about Clyde’s dreams, Xavier’s ambitions, or the vampire civil war.  She’s probably the monkey wrench that everyone else in the series needs thrown into their plans at this point.  Hopefully people enjoy that aspect since it could be what starts the finale ball rolling.

Let me open the floor.  Have you ever had a character that you thought was a toss away turn into a major player in story events?

About Charles Yallowitz

Charles E. Yallowitz was born, raised, and educated in New York. Then he spent a few years in Florida, realized his fear of alligators, and moved back to the Empire State. When he isn't working hard on his epic fantasy stories, Charles can be found cooking or going on whatever adventure his son has planned for the day. 'Legends of Windemere' is his first series, but it certainly won't be his last.
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9 Responses to Desirae Duvall Rides Again

  1. L. Marie says:

    So interesting how a character pushes her way into a bigger role than planned.

    I have a character I had planned to drop after one chapter. But an advisor saw potential in him that I couldn’t see. So now I am working on a book in which he is one of the protagonists.


    • That’s really cool. I’ve actually had people try that with my characters, but they usually pick ones that have nothing else. For example, Fritz Warrenberg who was a simple inventor before the stories. They liked his personality, which was fun to write. Yet I don’t think it was enough to carry his own story.

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      • L. Marie says:

        You have a good handle on where you want your series to go. Since your outlines are so detailed, you would know what the character is all about. Also you have so many characters that readers find interesting. We might think, like we did with the Harry Potter series, that you could take any of the secondary characters and build a series out of that character, without really thinking through that the character might have a limited use. There was a reason why J. K. Rowling didn’t do a spin-off book series on some of the other characters at Hogwarts (though she developed the movies with Newt of all characters).


      • Thanks. Rowling is strange. She never did a spin-off, but she routinely throws out new information. At this point, I wonder why she hasn’t written a sequel.


  2. I never had a character like you describe ( I thought the character was a toss-away but turned into a major player in story events.) I do like the idea, though. I also think Desirae is an interesting character and could steal scenes for sure.

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  3. I’ve had them force their way into more importance a couple of times. Never such that they became a main character, though. Your posts seem catch me at the right times. I’ve been debating the need for more problems and not just bigger ones. Extra villains might be just what I need.


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