Action and Knowing Your Character

Spider-Man vs Juggernaut (Marvel Comics)

Spider-Man vs Juggernaut (Marvel Comics)

I’ve talked about writing action scenes before and people still ask for some tips.  Today I’m going to give a few that center on knowing your character.  Some might be repeats from other posts, but it doesn’t hurt to hear it again if you plan on doing a lot of action.

  1. You really need to know the limits of your characters.  The above picture shows that Spider-Man may be strong, but Juggernaut is stronger.  The writer/artist know how to work such a fight without going outside the limits of the characters.  You would lose readers if Juggernaut starts doing nimble backflips or Spider-Man hurls the big guy into the next county.  As powerful as they are, each one has a limit.
  2. Not every weapon can penetrate armor.  I thought of this when I caught part of a movie that had two knights fighting.  They had platemail and it ended with a simple slash across the chest.  There was no mark on the other warrior that you could see since he fell face down, but it got me thinking.  How often do authors focus on the weapons and tend to forget the armor?  You can get so caught up in the offense of an action scene that you ignore the defensive side beyond a few blocks.
  3. Being a warrior doesn’t mean you can use EVERY weapon created.  Check out the heroes of Windemere and you’ll see that each one has signature weapons.  If they grab something else then they tend to wield it like their favored weapon.  The idea of a ‘Weapons Master’ is common in fantasy, but tends to be reserved for ancient characters that take the role of mentor.  A young hero like Luke Callindor shouldn’t be able to use more than his sabers, a range weapon, and a few simple things.  Though his level of skill would vary.  Remember that practice and training is necessary for a character to develop even if they’re a natural.
  4. If you describe a character as having long legs then kicking might be more useful than punching.  I always wonder why some fight scenes exclude any moves from below the waist.  If the character is a skilled fighter then they you can believe they would play to their strengths.  Powerful and long legs shouldn’t be ignored.  I’m not talking only kicks to the head too.  Injuring an opponent’s legs will slow them down, so shots to the knees and ankles should be considered.
  5. Height, weight, girth, etc. is something that I try hard to remember.  Case in point, a halfling or gnome is a shorter target.  A taller warrior would have to stab down, swing low, and alter their fighting styles to handle a ‘below average’ height.  The trade off is that shorter characters need to find ways to reach more vital areas on their enemies, which is where stealth and range come into play.  Yet, there is another side of this and that’s allies remembering this fact.  There’s a fight scene in Prodigy of Rainbow Tower where Nyx and Nimby are back-to-back.  Nyx takes advantage of having a shorter ally and ducks high strikes without worrying about Nimby getting hit.  Same goes for archers being able to shoot over shorter allies.

Those are what came to mind and I’m sure there are more that I forgot.  I’ll probably revisit this if I can think of any others.  As usual, I’m always up for suggestions and questions that can create other posts.

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Guest Post. Handy hints on developing a villain over a series.

Hey! Another guest post of mine. I’ve been busy. 🙂

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I am delighted to welcome my cyber buddy Charles Yallowitz, author of the long running fantasy series, Legends of Windemere, to talk about villains. Legends of Windemere is a seriously epic series – 9 books and counting. But as well as writing lots of excellent books Charles runs a great blog; plenty of thought provoking posts, interesting news and lots of chat in the comments. I thoroughly recommend you have a look at it, here. But do read the article first won’t you? Which reminds me… over to you Mr Yallowitz.

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First, thanks to M T McGuire for allowing me to write a guest post. The question posed was about character development over the course of a series. Legends of Windemere, my fantasy adventure series, has six books out with a seventh on the way. So I get asked about this area a lot…

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The Stanton Effect: Invoking Wonder

A few post I wrote about Invoking Wonder.

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6a00d83451b64669e2017c3652fef8970b-250wiThank you to L. Marie for asking me to be a part of this guest post series. My name is Charles E. Yallowitz. I run the Legends of Windemere blog and publish books under the same title. I think that covers the “My Name is” requirement.

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This is about one of the points on Andrew Stanton’s TED Talk. I chose to write about invoking wonder in the reader. As a fantasy author, this is a very important goal whether I focus on it or not. I have to draw readers into a world that doesn’t exist outside of the page, so there is more that I have to say. For example, I can say, “They drive to New York City,” and people will immediately visualize the city with familiar landmarks. You may have to describe some of the area, but people have a pre-existing notion of what…

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WRITING AND PROMOTING A SERIES: Series authors, Nicholas C. Rossis and Charles Yallowitz

Check out a joint interview with me and NIcholas C. Rossis.

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WRITING AND PROMOTING A SERIES:

by series authors, Nicholas C. Rossis, Pearseus series, and

Charles Yallowitz, Legends of Windemere series

Guest bloggers and former guests on CHANGES conversations between authors
(Episodes 7 and 9), http://www.sallyember.com

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This joint post was made possible by the invitation of Sally Ember, who has been gracious enough to allow us to speak on her blog. She has done this knowing that Mr. Rossis and Mr. Yallowitz have a history of crazy antics. Indeed, some of these antics occurred on Sally’s very own LIVE video show *CHANGES* conversations between authors, which you can find online. Thank you to Sally Ember and we hope everyone enjoys this post on writing a series.

Check out Nicholas’s newest release, Pearseus: Vigil, by clicking on the above cover art and
prepare for a March/April debut of Charles’s next book, Legends…

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It’s Reining Men Tour – Day Two

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Today is the second day of Traci Sanders’ It’s Reining Men Tour. It would be nice if you could jump over there and have a look at her blog. The post today is a little about me and my blog. While there look around and tell her I sent you and who knows, you may hit it off.

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Traci is the author of When Darkness Breaks

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Local news anchor, Amber Woods, seemed to have it all – a thriving career, two beautiful children, and a doting husband named Drake. Life was perfect…until her world was turned upside down in one fateful night. While the incident causes Amber to renew her priorities; unable to deal with what happened, Drake begins sinking into a deep depression laced with infidelity and alcohol.

Hoping a change of scenery will salvage her quickly deteriorating marriage, Amber agrees that a move to New York may…

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Mini-Update: New Blurbs and Other Stuff

An Actual Comic Cover Blurb.  Made me chuckle.

An Actual Comic Cover Blurb. Made me chuckle.

As I lay here waiting to see if my stomach is either hungry or unhappy with something I ate or decided to attract a bug overnight, I thought I’d make a post.  About what?  Just random stuff, I guess.  Probably book related and I have had a few questions:

  1. New blurbs for all LEGENDS OF WINDEMERE books will be going up over the course of the week.  I already did the ones for BEGINNING OF A HERO, PRODIGY OF RAINBOW TOWER, and ALLURE OF THE GYPSIES.  That last one is still being reviewed though.  The goal is to get them all up by the weekend before I get my new author photo.  This way I can step into a new site I found with all the fresh stuff.
  2. I am hoping to release LEGENDS OF WINDEMERE: SLEEPER OF THE WILDWOOD FUGUE at some point in the spring.  The goal is April, but we all know what happens with me a deadlines.  The thing here is that I don’t want to do a mid-month release like the last two.  That probably didn’t have as much of an impact on the sales as them being part of a lengthy series.  Still I need to minimize the things that are going against me.
  3. Sales have been royally sucking and I’m out of ideas as far as promoting.  Trying to push on is the only thing I can do, but some aspects are really starting to bog down my mood.  It might be why one or two of my characters have become so irritable and depressed.  Yesterday I got Nyx out of her funk and today I do the same to Sari.  The boys are going to have to wait for the opportune moment.
  4. Shoveling snow in my pajamas was not fun.
  5. Dear god, what did I eat that is making my insides wish they’d never been given sentience by that voodoo priestess?
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Book Feature: Choices by J.L. McFadden

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J.L. McFadden is author of The Guardian series, a unique blend of paranormal, urban fantasy and romance. This post is part of his 4WillsPublishing-organized blog tour, to celebrate the launch of Choices, the second book in his series. Before you leave, don’t forget to take part in his Rafflecopter Giveaway!

The Guardian: Book 1 in the Guardian series

From the blog of Nicholas C. Rossis, author of science fiction, the Pearseus epic fantasy series and children's booksIn The Guardian, John, a young man from Detroit, realizes he has a special bond with a vampire, Gala. This gives him special abilities and makes both of them a target, as the ancients will stop at nothing to destroy him and his relationship with this unbridled female vampire.

Choices: Book 2 in the Guardian series

From the blog of Nicholas C. Rossis, author of science fiction, the Pearseus epic fantasy series and children's booksIn Choices, Adela, head of Gala’s coven, and John both have their fair share of choices to make. Adela must think of her coven, but at the same time she feels a…

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#Authors – CONFIRMED COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT NOTIFICATION…

Search for your books and warn FB. Don’t fill out the copyright claims form on the site though. It’s a trap.

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I’ve just been advised by Author Jack Eason that the following Facebook Site is offering six of his books in PDF format – WITHOUT AUTHORISATION, PERMISSION OR PAYMENT AGREEMENT WITH HIM…

Please check if YOUR BOOKS are being offered without YOUR permission.

If YES, NOTIFY FACEBOOK IMMEDIATELY…

MESSAGE FROM AUTHOR SUSAN TOY

PLEASE don’t send the complaint forms!!!

This is a click farm that collects your email addresses to sell.

Also, the last time this happened to us and we complained about copyright infringement our computers were infected with a virus.

Block this site on Facebook so that they cannot promote their pirate site there. 

With all of us reporting the site it will get taken down.

DO NOT SEND YOUR PROOF OF COPYRIGHT TO THIS SITE

NEVER TRUST THIEVES!!!

https://www.facebook.com/ebookdownloaddotnet

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It’s Reining Men Tour – Traci Sanders Invited Me to Go Along

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Traci Sanders has made space for me on her blog A Word with Traci. She is having an event she calls It’s Reining Men Tour. Here is a little more about the tour and the wonderful person and author. I’ll be there all week so stop by when you have a chance and check out the other tabs on her site.

Tracy says

I have a very special ♣March♣ gift for all of you!

♣ 4 WEEKS

♣ 4 INCREDIBLE MALE AUTHORS

You will be entertained and enlightened!

Stay tuned to find out who our special authors are …

All during March!

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Author and mother of three, Traci Sanders has been composing poetry, songs, and children’s stories since the young age of ten. In 2003, she opened her home to young children in her community offering “beyond the basics” teachings. In 2008, she was recognized by the Child…

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Sensitive Topics

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This is a tough post to write because it edges near things that I prefer to discuss in private.  We all know the topics that can stir a massive fight.  Issues that draw out the emotions and typically block rational discussion once the trigger is pulled.  I won’t even list the areas here because I’m sure we all know them.  Instead, I’m going to ask a simple question:

How do you touch on these in your stories without causing the fight?

First, let’s admit that people are going to see what they want to see.  Someone that goes into a fictional story with an agenda will find a way to satisfy that agenda.  I write fantasy adventure with an ensemble cast, but I still get the rare complaint that falls into one of the forbidden topics.  I tend to ignore them because I don’t write my stories with these subjects in mind.  Ignore might not be the right word.  I don’t publicly react and I look at how I can adapt to remove the complaint from happening in the future.  This really is hard to explain when one focuses on not starting a fight or holding onto neutrality.

Another thought is if we should focus on these topics if they aren’t part of the story.  They can subtly turn up, but there are books I’ve read where it feels like such topics consumed the actual story.  Reminds me of trying to see the road through a thick fog.  Not to belittle the issues, but it’s always strange to read a story that doesn’t focus on them and somehow gets overshadowed.  Though, I do wonder if that was only my perception and the author never noticed/intended for it to happen.

So, what do other authors do when it comes to ‘taboo’ topics?  Are they impossible to avoid in today’s world?

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