Questions 3 and Looking Back at ‘Path of the Traitors’

Cover Art by Jason Pedersen

How to explain Path of the Traitors?  This entry into Legends of Windemere is the third of the added trio.  The other two helped me with Yola Biggs the Chaos Goddess and Delvin Cunningham.  This one is where Trinity the Chaos Elf Queen gets a spotlight that she really deserves.  Of course, this led to a bunch of other events that fixed up a few other issues.

The main reason Path of the Traitors was a surprise entry was because I didn’t expect to keep Trinity in the series for as long as she did.  I really expected to kill her off earlier, but she acted as a great foil/rival/frenemy/something with Nyx.  They made each other grow enough that I felt she deserved her own story.  Her existence changed the chaos elves too, so that added to the eventual creation of a redemption book for Trinity.  I now had my evil elves being slaves to the real villain and their heartless Queen being a villain in order to prevent her people from being wiped out.  Having this side-story get more attention and grow leading into the last volume couldn’t be resisted.

Since Trinity didn’t have her own group and I wanted her to have a companion, I created Quail the Mapper.  This was a chaos elf who was raised by gnomes.  He became a jumping point for me to introduce more about chaos elf culture and Windemere history.  His job is called ‘Mapper’, which is exactly what you would think.  He travels the world to rewrite the maps since things are always changing.  Through Quail, I got to show more of the Frost Barrens and introduce other regions.  He wasn’t much of a fighter too, which made him unique since I tended to give all of my characters combat abilities up to this point.  This put more on Trinity’s shoulders.

There were three (four?) other allies, but the other one (two?) that stood out is another long returning character.  Since he left the series, I had be slipping Nimby (Luke’s first best friend) into the background.  He would either really show up or be noted in some fashion, but he was around.  Being able to bring him back and set him up to be a part of the final battle was something I didn’t think I could pull off.  Yet, I did it and he brought another character along . . . the Lich possessed part of his body.  So, I got to do this little comedy duo between Nimby and the Lich while making them both effective and work towards their own redemption.  I did fear I was going too far with the redemption arcs, but Trinity, Nimby, and the Lich all had a little twinkle of possibility.  At least in my mind.

Path of the Traitors had a timeline challenge too.  Events had to wrap up in time for the survivors to be involved in the battle.  Yet, they started right after Ritual of the Lost Lamb, which meant I had to either write in a delay of the champions or have this book run alongside the final volume.  I went with the latter and had to throw in a few events and interactions to show how things were playing out.  They were more for myself than the audience since I wanted to make sure I had the timeline right in my head.  Not sure if a reader would notice Trinity getting to the final battle too early or late.  Better safe than sorry and it doesn’t hurt anything.

I’m not going to wonder if I would change anything.  This book was a surprise joy to dream up and write.  The outline helped, but it was a lot of flying by the seat of my pants in terms of details.  I changed stuff a lot, especially when a character I introduced on a whim to handle one event got adopted by the group.  Starting to notice that this happens a lot in this series.  Oh well.

Some questions to consider:

  1. What do you think of redemption arcs in general?
  2. If a character knowingly does evil to protect others, can they ever earn redemption?
  3. How would you handle having a body part possessed by a mouthy, undead wizard?
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About Charles Yallowitz

Charles E. Yallowitz was born, raised, and educated in New York. Then he spent a few years in Florida, realized his fear of alligators, and moved back to the Empire State. When he isn't working hard on his epic fantasy stories, Charles can be found cooking or going on whatever adventure his son has planned for the day. 'Legends of Windemere' is his first series, but it certainly won't be his last.
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12 Responses to Questions 3 and Looking Back at ‘Path of the Traitors’

  1. L. Marie's avatar L. Marie says:
    1. I enjoy these arcs. I’m working on one right now.
    2. Yes. Some people are truly convinced that they are doing the right thing. But once they come to a different revelation, yes, redemption is possible. Many believe that certain people don’t “deserve” redemption because of what they did. I can’t help thinking of a conversation between Gandalf and Frodo: “Frodo: ‘It’s a pity Bilbo didn’t kill Gollum when he had the chance.’
      Gandalf: ‘Pity? It’s a pity that stayed Bilbo’s hand. Many that live deserve death. Some that die deserve life. Can you give it to them, Frodo?”
    3. Sounds very uncomfortable. I’d be all for having an exorcism.

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  2. Redemption stories can be heartwarming. I like them.

    I think evil to protect others is a high form of evil and given the proper remorse redemption is possible.

    I guess it depends on the body part but in general I would want a more powerful wizard to get rid of the mouthy undead one.

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  3. Having your “villains” get a spotlight does bring depth to a long series.

    1. What do you think of redemption arcs in general? We don’t see enough of them. So many people insist the “bad guys” should die, and aren’t willing to consider other responses.
    2. If a character knowingly does evil to protect others, can they ever earn redemption? They would have to show maturity and commitment over time to earn forgiveness.
    3. How would you handle having a body part possessed by a mouthy, undead wizard? I don’t remember this specifically, but I’d probably try to immobilize the limb, with a cast or by wrapping it in stiff bandages, to keep it from taking actions I didn’t want it to.

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  4. Redemption arcs are classic for a reason. They make readers think about their own prejudices and such things. I think only evil characters need redemption. It’s a powerful tool for an author. I’d be worried about which body part. Now I’m thinking about two sons who are polar opposites, one of which is a mouthy wizard. It has almost a Greek mythology vibe to it.

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