Rise of the Dawn Fangs

Posted on March 2, 2018 by Charles Yallowitz

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Born from light
Summoned to deliver death
And an accident
That washed across the world
One was born anew

A world unknown
Wracked with changes
Another added to the list
But one that must hide to thrive
Two agree to secrets

More mysteries unfold
Deviations from the norm
No longer of the true fang
Answers are needed
Three decide to find them

The inevitable occurs
A war of fangs now looms
Those who need the dark
Will face the vampires of light
More Dawn Fangs will rise

About Charles Yallowitz

Charles E. Yallowitz was born, raised, and educated in New York. Then he spent a few years in Florida, realized his fear of alligators, and moved back to the Empire State. When he isn't working hard on his epic fantasy stories, Charles can be found cooking or going on whatever adventure his son has planned for the day. 'Legends of Windemere' is his first series, but it certainly won't be his last.

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16 Responses to Rise of the Dawn Fangs

L. Marie says:

March 2, 2018 at 11:10 am

Wow! It’s like a prophecy! How cool.

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- Charles Yallowitz says:
  
  March 2, 2018 at 11:12 am
  
  The funny thing is that the emergence of the Dawn Fangs kind of takes vampire kind out of the influence of destiny. Clyde really is an accident and one that is cunning enough to stay under Gabriel’s radar.
  
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  - L. Marie says:
    
    March 2, 2018 at 12:51 pm
    
    It will be interesting to see how successful Clyde continues to be in eluding Gabriel’s notice.
    
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  - Charles Yallowitz says:
    
    March 2, 2018 at 1:59 pm
    
    Even if he is noticed, Gabriel can’t do anything personally. As long as Clyde doesn’t try to unbalance the world, he’s safe.
    
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The Story Reading Ape says:

March 2, 2018 at 11:16 am

Great intro to a novel, Charles 😃

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- Charles Yallowitz says:
  
  March 2, 2018 at 11:18 am
  
  Thanks. The hype for War of Nytefall begins. 😀 Technically, it started on the first Thursday of February, but the character profiles haven’t been getting as much attention as I thought.
  
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Jacquie Biggar says:

March 2, 2018 at 11:22 am

Really good!

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- Charles Yallowitz says:
  
  March 2, 2018 at 11:24 am
  
  Thanks. 🙂
  
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John W. Howell says:

March 2, 2018 at 2:40 pm

Very good, Charles. Raised the hair on the neck.

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- Charles Yallowitz says:
  
  March 2, 2018 at 2:46 pm
  
  Thanks. 🙂
  
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Nicholas C. Rossis says:

March 5, 2018 at 4:49 am

It’s like a cool blurb. In verse. Wow.

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- Charles Yallowitz says:
  
  March 5, 2018 at 6:52 am
  
  Thanks. Didn’t think about the blurb possibility. Do poems ever work out as blurbs?
  
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  - Nicholas C. Rossis says:
    
    March 5, 2018 at 7:09 am
    
    It’s so original, I don’t think there’s any real data on that. You could try it and let us know, if you’re feeling brave 🙂
    
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  - Charles Yallowitz says:
    
    March 5, 2018 at 7:17 am
    
    Not feeling that brave since it’s a new series. Last thing I want is to try it out and mess up the entire thing. Noticing you rarely get second chances with blurbs on Amazon.
    
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  - Nicholas C. Rossis says:
    
    March 5, 2018 at 8:45 am
    
    Or with anything else, for that matter!
    
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