Weapon? Who Needs a Weapon? (Part 4 of a Series)

In the midst of my book debut, I’m still going to continue the post series on writing combat.  We’ve covered guns, melee, and armor.  Means two areas left: hand-to-hand and magic.  Obviously, we’re touching the former if you bothered to watch the video.  Theatrics aside, the video shows a few points.

  1. Your weapon-using heroes can still use kicks and punches in combat.  If there is an opening for it then a warrior can take it.  This isn’t necessary, but it’s something to keep in mind.  Swords locked and they’re face to face?  Quick kick to the shin or ankle if you think it will work.
  2. A drawn out hand-to-hand fight will predominately be blocks, dodges, and light blows made to push the opponent away or knock them down.  Even in fiction, the human body feels pain and takes damage.  This isn’t pro-wrestling where you can still run and jump around after taking 10 chair shots to the face. This is another guideline because you see a lot of martial arts movies and books where each fighter takes damaging strikes and it doesn’t phase them.  It really depends on if you’re going for realism or theatrics.
  3. Think your fight scene through.  If a character throws a right hand punch and it’s blocked, they are left open.  They also can’t punch again immediately.  You can avoid this by making fights simplistic and vague, but you should be quick on those.  Maybe cover with banter.  Thinking the fight scene through isn’t very hard.  Just picture it or even slowly move your arms or legs to imitate the motion.  You will notice any openings on your own body and be able to create a realistic rally of moves instead of ‘he punch’ ‘other guy punch’ etc.
  4. Watch movies with hand-to-hand fight scenes.  Not just Bruce Lee.  Scenes like the one above will teach you how to make a rally of moves and help you visualize the fight.  Try to find a variety of scenes because there are a lot of styles out there.
  5. If you have an idea of what style you want a character to have then research that style through Youtube and basic training sites.  For example, if you want your warrior to be more of a kicker than a puncher, look into kickboxing.  You don’t have to know the names of moves, but it helps to know how the schools operate.  An extra bonus is that your character’s fighting style doesn’t come off as random and muddled.
  6. Punching armor hurts and shouldn’t do more damage to the knight unless magic or BS is involved.  Same goes for arrow catching, immune to groin shot, one-handed sword catching, and many of the flashy stuff you see in movies.  Best to use them sparingly with explanations or leave them in the movies.
  7. The hand-to-hand style should accommodate the size and skills of the warrior.  This goes back to the same thing in weapons.  Halflings cannot toss people around like a barbarian and ogres should not be flipping around like monkeys.  They aren’t built that way unless you make them built that way.  There’s nothing wrong with a warrior have a weak area like strength or speed.  It makes the fights more exciting.
  8. No flipping and leaping around in platemail armor.
  9. Last and extremely important!  Remember your injuries!  If two characters are going blow for blow and get injuries then they have to act like them.  Broken ribs, shattered arms, and aching stomachs need to have some reaction.  You can still punch with a broken arm, but the strength will be lacking and the puncher will be in pain.  If you have trouble with this then list the injuries as you go and check the scene again with them in mind.

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Unlimited Ammo and One-Handed Greatswords?

So Jamie’s Got a Gun

Pointy End Goes Into The Other Man

No Magic Pasties of Protection!

About Charles Yallowitz

Charles E. Yallowitz was born, raised, and educated in New York. Then he spent a few years in Florida, realized his fear of alligators, and moved back to the Empire State. When he isn't working hard on his epic fantasy stories, Charles can be found cooking or going on whatever adventure his son has planned for the day. 'Legends of Windemere' is his first series, but it certainly won't be his last.
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6 Responses to Weapon? Who Needs a Weapon? (Part 4 of a Series)

  1. sknicholls says:

    I still prefer magic!


  2. MishaBurnett says:

    I’m not sure if this is worthy of a whole new post, but what about combat in which one (or more) of the combatants has some sort of supernatural enhancement? The fight scenes in my books are heavily unbalanced because Catskinner is able to do things with James’ body that are far beyond human abilities.

    I also draw upon my own experience fighting, which is not based on any formal training or recognizable style, and so I don’t tend to describe things in terms of individual strikes, just an overall impression of people trying to hurt each other.


    • A post on using superpowers in writing and how they should work in combat could be something. I’m writing about using magic in combat next week, but that’s different than physical enhancements. At least it is in my mind. I haven’t done much with those kinds of powers, so I’ll have to think about them.

      I typically do a few moves that start the fight and then go vague until a pause in the action happens. I think it’s easier and more acceptable in present tense writing. Past tense would be odd.


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