The Lair of Gregorio Roman

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While Nyte had some detailed description and the Scrumptious Siren had a lot, there wasn’t much for Gregorio’s lair.  Home to the ancient gnomish vampire, I made it very vague beyond there being tables and experiments everywhere.  I added a bedroom for one scene, but most of my attention went to the entrance.  This would be a long slide and some dips and slime, all of which will change from time to time.  I have it in my head that Gregorio gets bored quite often and designing new entrances keeps him entertained.  Not that he gets a lot of company, which is a gripe he makes clear at times.

I’ve thought a lot about why I didn’t make a lot of details for Gregorio’s lair and I think it’s the same reason I went all out with the Scrumptious Siren.  I created him as a recluse that stays out of politics and gets food by having it delivered by his friends.  He’s been around for so long that I can understand why he wouldn’t wander far away from home.  Gregorio probably had seen it all until the Great Cataclysm changed everything and then he just wanted to stay safe.  My description was rather basic and that felt right since he hadn’t done much with the place.

One thing I did create is a reputation, which hints that his home was nearly a legend since very few have gone beyond the doorway.  This could be an in-story reason for Gregorio doing very little with a large lair.  He is a gnome, which means he is always working on an experiment and that requires space.  Not to mention the inevitable explosions probably destroyed a lot of the decorations in the main chamber.  Still, I didn’t even describe scraps of such things, so the place comes off as very barren.  There are many chambers that I haven’t added either because the action didn’t require them.  All I know is that this place is supposed to be huge and there might have been a time when Gregorio had a lot of children who stayed there.  Not biological kids, but those he turned like Nadia Sylvan and Clyde.

As I think about the lair, I get the sense that this is a place that is going to evolve as the series progresses.  It started as almost dead and quiet because that was where Gregorio was at this point in his long life.  With the changes that Clyde has brought to the world, I can see him reviving his lair and being more open to seeing the rest of Windemere.  Will he sire more children?  I don’t think he’s going to do that, but I can see him creating a home for Dawn Fangs who are looking for a place to live.  Not all of them will want to be out in the open and Gregorio’s lair is built to contain a lot of power.  Much of this is still in the works because it was never a focus during the planning stages.  Yet, I really do think there is more to this place than I realize.

So, has anybody else designed a location in their story that didn’t come to life at the beginning?  Was it better that way or did you consider it a problem?

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The 2018 Author Interview Series Featuring Suzanne Burke

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Don Massenzio It’s time for the next subject for my 2018 author interview series. Author interviews are posted every Friday throughout the year. I am honored to continue this series with Australian author Suzanne Burke You can catch up with … Continue reading →

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Traveler Blog Tour

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Hey, there, and welcome to stop number 11 (if my math is correct) of the Traveler Blog Tour! Traveler is the third in S.E. Anderson’s Starstruck series. While I haven’t yet gotten to read this one, the prior 2 were highly enjoyable.

So enjoyable, I had a certain half-monkey of mine take some time to speak with the main character herself.

Travis had to admit…he was a bit nervous about this interview. He was used to showing up in-person to speak to his interviewee, but this was one of those rare occasions that he didn’t happen to have transportation. What he had was a video call setup, determination (or stubbornness…one of those), and an afternoon to kill. And what’s more, he had someone to interview.

Just as soon as she located her, of course. He’d been using this video setup to contact as many different ships and spaceports and the…

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An Exciting (Scary) New Venture

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I launched my author blog about three years ago and have watched it grow beyond anything I’d hoped. I’ve met many great people as I’ve made some friendships and have helped some authors along the way.

As luck would have it, I lost my day job about two months ago and I’m still in search of regular employment to keep the lights on and put food on the table.

The silver lining that emerged from this is that I’m embarking on a new venture. During the past year, I have edited books for a few select authors as kind of a pilot and test launch of a set of services that I hoped to turn into a business. My extra ‘free time’ and my need to generate some income, I’m launching a book editing/formatting service formally as a separate WordPress site.

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Chastity Sullivan: Hostess of the Scrumptious Siren

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One thing that seems to always be connected with vampires is sex or, at the very least, a primal lust.  Can already see people getting squeamish here.  Well, you might have noticed that none of the previous characters had anything sexual about them.  At best, you have Stephanie Talon needing to do her rituals in the nude, but that’s only because she does them by bathing in blood.  Anyway, the final character to be spotlighted here makes up for this pretty nicely.  I give to you Chastity Sullivan the seductive, playful owner of the Scrumptious Siren.  It’s a bar, bakery, and brothel, which I came up with on the fly and still don’t know why I connected cupcakes to her pre-determined antics.  Maybe I should start at the beginning here.

Chastity appeared for a little bit in a Vampire game before the player left college.  This was the same person who played Sari in the Dungeons & Dragons game.  So, you may see some similarities between the two.  Instead of a bar owner, this version was a biker girl who loved drinking, flirting, and never backed down from a challenge.  Unfortunately, she didn’t stay around for long, but made an impact by her interactions.  Her biggest one was butting heads with Mab in a way that was similar to the Nyx/Sari relationship.  Only difference here is that they weren’t really friends and Chastity would go out of her way to make Mab uncomfortable.  This is something that was carried over to the books to turn them into rivals more than friends.  A lot of this stems from an incident that Mab hasn’t forgiven Chastity for, which is why things tend to be tense around them.

The first version of Chastity I made for the books stayed similar to the original and was basically an occasional fling for Clyde.  This ended up hurting her in terms of development, so I made her the gang’s information gatherer.  That part remained and I upped her sexuality to the point where she was a prostitute then a madam for a few more years.  Once I sat down to outline and profile for the final product, I toned that down a bit and made her a cunning business owner who is allied with Clyde’s gang.  A final tweak was that she is dedicated to him because he saved her from an abusive maker.  It isn’t blind obedience, but a solid faith in Clyde’s abilities and causes.  That is why she listens for rumors that can help her ‘savior’.  Unlike Luther, she gets information directly from sources instead of watching and listening in silence.  This makes them a perfect couple in terms of spying, which is why they have a close relationship in the books.

Perhaps one of the oddest things about Chastity is her place of business.  I expected it to be a bar and brothel where she uses sex to gather information.  That part kind of stayed, but then things took a turn to make her a more versatile businesswoman.  It started with me naming it the Scrumptious Siren and I meant for it to be a sexual thing.  Unfortunately, I was pretty hungry when I began writing the description and made the building look like a giant cupcake.  Then I put pies on the sills, which were guarded by goblins.  I got inside to describe the bar and poles going to the bottom floors for sexual encounters.  Yet, I had an open air bakery going around the outer edge of the main floor and people buying pastries alongside beer and sex.  The craziest thing is that it really worked for an establishment that Chastity would create and run.  In fact, this combination is why I think the vampires and mortals who come to the Scrumptious Siren love her so much.  It’s to the point where she could amass an army without using her charm magic.

The funniest story with Chastity is a part of her clothing from the game that I carried over to the books.  The biker version had bright pink hand prints on her pants and would go around asking all of the characters if their hands fit.  It always got either a laugh or an uncomfortable look depending on the person she did it to.  Don’t really remember what would happen if her target’s hands fit, but I know it happened once when I was doing something else.  This hand print thing was kept for the book version who wears a dress dotted with them.  Whoever is lucky enough to be chosen is brought to her private quarters for a special party.  She only wears this dress during the business hours though.

See more of Chastity in War of Nytefall: Loyalty!

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Time to Lie, on #LisaBurtonRadio

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Hey there all you time bandits and meddlers of history. Welcome all of you young people trying to find a place in the modern world. You’ve landed on Lisa Burton Radio, the only show that brings you characters from the books you love.

I’m your host, Lisa the robot girl, and my special guest today is Landon Bridges. He’s a college student who thinks he may have stumbled upon something that will unlock the secret of time travel. “Welcome to the show, Landon.”

“Hello Lisa! Thanks for having me.”

“Okay Landon, Let’s get into the science of this thing. How is time travel actually going to work?”

“Here’s the thing Lisa, hold on to your hat, everyone can time travel. My theory, and I believe this to be accurate, is that because the brain is both a biochemical and electrical machine, all neural activity results in electrical signals that are…

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The Scrumptious Siren: Where Mortals and Vampires Mingle

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You’re going to meet Chastity Sullivan tomorrow for the final character profile, but today we’re looking into her realm.  Originally, she was going to be a tavern owner in the city of Nyte, but then I moved her into a more neutral establishment.  It was still a tavern and brothel because the character is fairly lustful as you’ll see in War of Nytefall: Loyalty.  She’s ten pounds of Id in a five pound dress, so her business had to show this as well.  Over the top would be a starting point and I looked at various vampire bars in fiction to get an idea.  I was ready to roll once I sat down to write.

Then, I got to the chapter where the Scrumptious Siren was introduced.  First thing I realized was that I didn’t have a name for the place, so I took some time to design one that embodied Chastity.  My focus was a little muddled and the original attempts were bad sex puns that didn’t make any sense with Windemere.  They would barely make sense on Earth if you wanted to keep the place a pseudo-secret. I went with the siren due to her seductiveness and for some reason scrumptious came soon after.  This was after I had eaten too, so it wasn’t like I was hungry, which the rest of this description will make people doubt.

I just went with whatever popped up in my head, which started with a hill that was covered in thin trees and home to hummingbirds.  That went smoothly and then I suddenly found that I made the building resemble a cupcake.  Wait, what?  Fine, I went with it and then got inside.  Chastity had a bakery that went around the main bar area and an enchanted menu on the ceiling.  I gave her private quarters with one that you would expect from a madam and another, yet to be seen, closer to that of a mild-mannered businesswoman.  I had magical poles that allowed people to slide up and down to reach the lower levels.  The bakery ended up being manned by goblins, who were incredibly protective of their wares, which were being sold alongside ale, stew, and kinky sex.  What in the world had I created here?

Honestly, I probably created one of my favorite settings ever.  There was such a bizarre mesh of the sexy vampire with the standard fantasy tavern and a common business around the edges.  For some reason, all of this worked and I think a big part of that is because I had Chastity standing in the middle.  She embodies all of this and the character’s charm abilities really fit the idea of a vampire businesswoman.  I don’t think the Scrumptious Siren could exist alongside anybody else, which makes me a little sad that I didn’t put any more prior thought into it.  Then again, it might have come out rather drab and dull if I forced it into creation.

One thing I had to figure out was the security.  Not only the goblins protecting the pies, but a way to protect the Scrumptious Siren from being revealed as a vampire bar.  This became a really big concern when I decided that patrons would be both mortal and vampire.  The mortals are enchanted as soon as they enter, so they never realize that they are among vampires.  The vampires are under orders not to hunt on the premises or they will be banned or killed.  With the Scrumptious Siren being one of the few places they can go to relax, nobody wants to anger the hostess.  Still, you can’t only have rules to keep people on their best behavior, so I needed a physical barrier.  That’s when the hummingbirds got an upgrade to vampiric agents.  Anyone who hunts around the area is attacked by the flock and drained.  This doesn’t kill them, but they aren’t going to get very far with no blood and this leaves them exposed to anything that decides to finish them off.

I’m still on the fence on if it counts as neutral territory too because Chastity is openly aligned with Clyde.  You’ll learn more about that tomorrow, but it means the traditional vampires would see her as an enemy.  Still, too many love the Scrumptious Siren in both the human and vampire societies.  Her disappearance would send some really big ripples through their worlds, which could reveal a lot of secrets.  The fact that she has operated without the Duragians ever becoming suspicious means that Chastity has created a business, which spans more than her corner of the world.  So, both sides can use it as a safe haven if need be.  This could change as the series progresses though.

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Teaser Tuesday: The Scrumptious Siren

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I’ve been holding this one back for a while because I wanted to connect it to the character bio on Thursday.  Take a look at the Scrumptious Siren, Chastity Sullivan, and Mab’s slight issue with the lustful businesswoman.  She’s gradually becoming one of my favorite characters to write because she’s unapologetically Id-driven and still the most ‘human’ out of the vampires.  Check out the full scene in War of Nytefall: Loyalty!

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The City of Nyte: Greatest of the Vampire Cities?

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When creating War of Nytefall, I didn’t really think about the cities that would be vampire only.  In fact, I only considered that they would have castles, lairs, and live within the pre-existing mortal society.  That was kind of lazy of me since that’s how settings typically go in these stories.  Then, Mab turned up in Legends of Windemere: The Mercenary Prince and talked about the city of Nyte.  It was a passing comment about the vampire capital and I didn’t think much of it.  In fact, I nearly forgot about it and it took me a while to find it and confirm the spelling.  So, what did I come up with for this central location?

Honestly, I was very sparse in the description of a lot of Nyte.  It came to me that the vampires wouldn’t make a city that would scream undead bloodsuckers.  There is a central castle where a lot of the action takes place and a city has spread out around it.  Windows all have shutters for when daylight comes, but since the sun only saps strength, the vampires still move around the city during those times.  The marketplace had the most detail because I imagined the stores having unconscious mortals in cages to sell as ‘full kegs’ or tap to give citizens a variety.  It was similar to ducks in a Chinese restaurant window.  Overall, the city came off as having a mild personality instead of being out there like Gaia, Rodillen, and Haven.  Again, this made sense because vampires wouldn’t want to stand out and I couldn’t see them trading with mortals.

Nyte is tucked in the middle of a wilderness, but the Great Cataclysm has moved it closer to mortal settlements.  This is another reason why the vampires are under attack from the beginning.  With nobody knowing what caused the Great Cataclysm, certain groups have considered that the vampires did it in an attempt to increase their hunting grounds.  This isn’t even close to true, but a terrified world has turned Nyte into a beacon of fear for one side and hope for another.  In this way, the city acts more as a symbol than a location.  It’s extremely important to the traditional vampires because of its role as a stronghold that has survived the 50 years of assault from their natural enemies.  Many consider the fall of Nyte being equal to the fall of vampire society, which isn’t surprising.  It’s been maintaining the front line in terms of battles and culture for centuries.

One might wonder why the Duragians haven’t tried to raze the city to the ground since it’s a known location.  I’ve thought about this too and came up with two conclusions.  One is that there is a benefit for keeping Nyte around.  Not every vampire lives here and those that don’t are harder to keep track of.  Destroying the city means that more enemies escape into the wind and become wandering threats.  If the Duragians ever manage to destroy most of the solitaries and smaller civilizations then they would go after Nyte because the threat of thousands of hiding vampires wouldn’t be there.  Also, a failed siege could result in retaliation at a time when the temples’ numbers are too low.  Needless to say, this isn’t what every priest and paladin believes, so there are still attempts.  The other conclusion is that there are magical defenses around the territory that only mortals fall for.  This would be illusions that direct them away from the city or traps that are checked for fresh meat every few hours.

Most of my attention with Nyte went to the castle, so I imagined it starting out with that and developing a city around it.  So, much of the area revolves around the nobility surviving an attack.  There are thick fortifications and secret passages that connect all of the important rooms.  Oddly enough, I didn’t really imagine this place with the window shutters, which hints that those who live there try to maintain a slight connection to their mortal lives.  This might not be on purpose with the current leadership, but the castle has a sense of never being changed beyond decorations.  Still, the details of this place remained tame compared to my past creations.  This may go throughout the whole series since vampires are focused on staying in the shadows.

Then again, there are two more locations that are important to War of Nytefall and they sit at the extremes when compared to Nyte.

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Free Story: For The Last Time (My Thousandth Post)!

This was definitely one of my favorites from the collection. Mostly because time travel stories always seem difficult to pull off.

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Yes, this is my thousandth post on this blog!

To celebrate, I’ve decided to post here my short stories. Every couple of weeks, I’ll be posting one story from my celebrated Exciting Destinies series for you to enjoy. With over 30 stories so far, I hope you’ll have lots of fun in the coming months!

I kick off the new series with For The Last Time, one of my favorite stories from The Power of Six.

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For The Last Time

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Truth be told, I have no idea who built the damned contraption. All I know is that, if they were standing in front of me, I would have some choice words for them. Not that I don’t appreciate the technical difficulties of a time machine, let alone one that can fit in a pocket. I’d…

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