Trapped Under the Dying Stars

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Eyes flutter open
To see a starry sky
I stare upon their beauty
Oblivious
To the shadows all around
Faded trees
Of a desiccated forest
Formerly familiar
Now a phantom of the past

My heart clenches
When I see a star die out
Followed by another
Reaching up to save them
Hands of cold and need
Slithering
To pin me down
Forcing me to watch
As my starry sky burns out

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About Charles Yallowitz

Charles E. Yallowitz was born, raised, and educated in New York. Then he spent a few years in Florida, realized his fear of alligators, and moved back to the Empire State. When he isn't working hard on his epic fantasy stories, Charles can be found cooking or going on whatever adventure his son has planned for the day. 'Legends of Windemere' is his first series, but it certainly won't be his last.
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16 Responses to Trapped Under the Dying Stars

  1. JoshuaRobertson's avatar robertsonwrites says:

    that is a very relatable piece of work.

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  2. Eva's avatar dental eggs says:

    Indeed. Sorry I haven’t commented in a while, Charles. Dentistry can be a big ass.

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  3. Wow, surprising panic. I am familiar with that unfamiliar forest, which I used to know so well…beautifully done.

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  4. Jack Flacco's avatar Jack Flacco says:

    The images flowed together smoothly. I had it all pictured in my mind. Good job!

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  5. Kirsten's avatar Kirsten says:

    There is a great sense of tension in this poem. You are great at giving the readers word pictures in their heads…

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  6. Great poem Charles, very dark and I like it, but don’t wish anyone to stay their too long.

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  7. L. Marie's avatar L. Marie says:

    Wow. Very frightening and sad image. But powerful.

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