War of Nytefall: Savagery Blurb Test

Cover Art by Alison Hunt

Time to test the blurb out . . . I should probably write it too.  Not sure why I was dragging my feet here.  This is going to go on the Amazon and Goodreads sites.  So, here goes:

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For the first time in over a century, Clyde will know what it means to feel powerless and weak.

Headless bodies appearing across Windemere is only the beginning as Clyde faces the terrifying Alastyre.  Able to match the Dawn Fang leader in power and ferocity, this new menace shows no sign of weakness or mercy.  With both friends and enemies getting dragged into the battle, Clyde will have to find a way to become stronger.  For that, he will have to accept an ancient challenge and pray that those he cares about and trusts can hold Alastyre at bay.

Which monster of Windemere will claim the top of the food chain?

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This one is really tough to put together because I used Clyde knowing fear in a previous blurb.  At the time, I didn’t realize he’d be even more terrified of Alastyre.  Yet, he does feel a greater sense of frustration and powerlessness this time.  Probably because he can tell that he’s facing a stronger enemy.  Fingers crossed, I guess.

About Charles Yallowitz

Charles E. Yallowitz was born, raised, and educated in New York. Then he spent a few years in Florida, realized his fear of alligators, and moved back to the Empire State. When he isn't working hard on his epic fantasy stories, Charles can be found cooking or going on whatever adventure his son has planned for the day. 'Legends of Windemere' is his first series, but it certainly won't be his last.
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8 Responses to War of Nytefall: Savagery Blurb Test

  1. I like the fact that it says a lot in a few words. I think you have a super blurb here.

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  2. I think you’ve done a great job.

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  3. The only thing I can think to add is some hint of Alastyre’s motivation. Why is he going after Clyde and the Dawn Fangs?

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