The Perfect Style Is . . .

I was in a writer’s workshop years ago and somebody asked what the perfect writing style was, so they could adopt it. This led to a lengthy conversation about what would constitute the perfect style and I played my part of the conversation.  I was young and foolish and probably exhausted from a long day of work.  It would be the following morning that I woke up with the true answer in my head.  It’s really quite simple if you think about it.  The perfect writing style is:

Your style

No, I’m not being lazy.  That really is the most simplistic and true answer.  I hear young authors worry about how their style sizes up to the masters or their peers.  Many of them begin to adopt the praised parts of various styles and create a mess that takes years to untangle.  A shed full of tangled Christmas lights can be easier to fix than a Frankenstein writing style.  So, one thing I would tell young authors is to find their own center style and evolve. What works for one author might not work for another, but you could always try.  Just be ready to say ‘that didn’t work’ and try again.

A key word that I just said was evolve, which is essential for a writer’s style.  I remember several classmates using styles that I found atrocious, muddled, or simply sloppy.  There was one person who wrote with horrible spelling and claimed it was his style.  I would put myself into a category of poor style during this time because my writing was all skin and bones with very little character development and subplot.  I stubbornly considered it my style for a month before I accepted the fact that I was using that as an excuse to never grow.  An aspiring author’s style must remain fluid and adaptable in order to absorb new aspects of writing.  Again, don’t absorb everything and be ready to reject certain things.  We can evolve our writing in a way that goes back and forth.

The tricky part is to know what works and what doesn’t because we are our own worst critics and greatest fans.  We can have blinders on about an aspect of our writing that doesn’t really work while at the same time despising a part of our style that does work.  I’ve got no idea why it works like this, but it’s the way the muses made us.  This is where family, friends, and anybody else who is willing to read your work can come in handy.  They will give you an outside eye about your style that can help you fine-tune it.  I stated a while back that critics and reviews are very important to a writer’s growth and this is true as long as the criticism is constructive.  I’m not talking about the ‘this author sucks and should jam their pen into their eye’ criticisms that I see on Amazon at times.  The only thing we learn from a review like this is that some people shouldn’t be allowed near the internet without a psych evaluation.

A final important note: develop a style that’s comfortable.  If you’re writing in a style that garners heaps of adoration while you despise your own work then you’re doing something wrong.  I know the reader is the main target of our art, but we cannot abandon our own enjoyment from the act of writing.  That will lead down a rather empty path.

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About Charles Yallowitz

Charles Yallowitz was born and raised on Long Island, NY, but he has spent most of his life wandering his own imagination in a blissful haze. Occasionally, he would return from this world for the necessities such as food, showers, and Saturday morning cartoons. One day he returned from his imagination and decided he would share his stories with the world. After his wife decided that she was tired of hearing the same stories repeatedly, she convinced him that it would make more sense to follow his dream of being a fantasy author. So, locked within the house under orders to shut up and get to work, Charles brings you Legends of Windemere. He looks forward to sharing all of his stories with you and his wife is happy he finally has someone else to play with.
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4 Responses to The Perfect Style Is . . .

  1. minisculegiants says:

    One thing I love about reading your work is that you do have a definite style. I love that you always write in present tense, and it’s very descriptive.

    • slepsnor says:

      Thanks. The present tense feels more natural and I’m sure I slip from time to time. A friend once said it was weird reading present tense fantasy because the standard is past tense. I think fantasy tends to read like a history book with the reader reading of events that already happened. I find it more fun to have the reader see events as they unfold. At least that’s my excuse. :)

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